my mock up book loods decent in size and the images fit nicely to me.
however i have asked some of my peers for feedback and they have said a few things to concider before i make my final book
- my image ideas have a strong presence and understanding for what I'm doing
- good concept
- interenting themes
- possibly keep text to a minimum if you struggle with it.
- look at different fonts
- the title is a good contrast with the idea for the front cover.
- the images are relatively self explanatory, especially after you know the title
- the text should be looked at more
- maybe make the pages thinner?
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