was not given much written feedback so i have included mostly my own self criticisms because im not happy with my presentation. as i find it extremely hard to talk in front of people i feel like my presentation was a mass failure.
preparation, appropriateness and organisation of slides:
in preparation i was not 100% on what to include in terms of research so i just went with instinct and what i wrote about in my essay.
i could have prepared much better, as my notes for each slide weren't exactly 20 words each. however i knew if i could memorize the words or have the ability to read from paper i still wouldn't be able say the words in order regardless.
depth of research evidence, including use of drawings:
i believe my research could have been better, as in the peer feedback i was told i could look further into sub cultures, and more into the actions of said cultures.
my drawings however i believe were successful because i can see that kind of sketch been involved in my final design.
presentation and delivery:
i did not deliver a fluent presentation in my own opinion, some of my peers said i appeared very passionate about what i was saying. and i missed some of the things i wanted to say.
as well as that, i felt as though people didnt quite understand what i was trying to put forward.
i was trying to communicate that i wanted to make a diagram that compared how feminism used to be viewed and how it has changed in modern society.
proposal of practical deliveries:
although i liked my initial ideas for my final image, because people didnt understand my meaning means that i should rethink my concept. i think something simpler and as effective, maybe a typology of feminists.
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